•          The Mess 

     

    The Mess was here a long time ago,

    When the grass had not even grown

    And they all have ask for it to go, 

    But they still witnessed for it alone.

     

    Be chosen or choose, it was our fate,

    Sing and ask, was our escape

    All straight in dirt, and frozen, we wait

    The call of our leadership.

     

    We don't want mess; too much

    We don't want mess; too dust

    Children are shaking their hands. 

     

    Walking silently through this terror

    See all the pain and all the loss

    Surround with tears and ask; I wonder

    If He will really came at last. 

     

    The mess is now just only a game

    For the king to get gift, but alas ! 

    I was straight in the dirt and rain,

    Watching all the white points on the grass.

     

    We don't want mess; too much

    We don't want mess; too dust

    They told me : stop the mess it costs. 

     

     

       Codes and messages 

     

    Mess : war.

    They : soldiers.

    Ask : pray.

    The call : order to begins the war.

    leadership : the major. 

    Too much (chorus) : so much lost, so much people who die.

    Too dust (chorus) : people who die.

    "Shaking their hands" : for saying Goodbye to people going at war.

    Terror : the military funeral

    Pain : body dismembered

    Loss : soldiers who die and let their family behind. 

    "Tears" : from woman who lost their husband, brother, and friends. "Ask" : the women who pray for their close relative. 

    He : god.

    King : president.

    Gift : interest.

    "White points on the grass" : Arligton national cemetery.

    It costs (chorus) : It cost in the way : money, and it cost in the way of lifes. 

     

       The choice

     

       I choose to do my protest song on war, because so much soldiers have die, before it was religion war, before war was only a way defend the country and protect citizen, but now it became a reason to get interest from another country.  In this poem, I repeat a many time "We don't want mess", indeed, we don't want any war, we don't want any massacre,any disaster, we don't want to take people from their family.  

     

     


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  • All lies on them

    James was born in 1995
    Green eyes, brown hair;
    The doctor sait his birth was way too fast
    But he survived.
    James has a long story,
    The first time we saw him, he was playing with those strings.
    He didn't know that he would keep it during his whole life.
     
    For the parents James was ok,
    For the doctors James was ok.
    James was like one of those kids
    They were afraid of his beauty
    2012, he went to the university
    Harvard, Julliard, MIT, Brown, Columbia wanted him
    But James, just took a decision with his strings
    James was the entire sky as himself
    For the parents James was ok
    For the doctors James was ok
    But more James grew up, more they believed it, more he cheated on it;
    2012, he lost his strings.
    That was the trigger of his next life.
     
     
    You can sing it with the soundtrack that you prefer because we didn't decide which one we'll keep. We choose to create a song about people with diseas because in everyday, we see people who can't go to school because they need to much treatment.

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  • I chose to write a protest song against the violence of our parents , the violence of street youth. My song is called "STRONGMAN"

     STRONGMAN

    I remember myself all these times

    When I had to deal with a strongman

    Freedom or happiness

    A dream almost unreal

     

    I speak for all the young people

    I speak for all the weak ones

    Who feel alone

    Together we are one

     

    Let us stop the sufferings

    From our fathers to our mothers

    Let us stop the sufferings

    These hoodlums are responsible for

    The sufferings of too many young people

     

    Mom when I com on your grave

    I am sad

    It's a protest song

    Against this abomination

    Make a rebellion

     

    Let's stop this violence

    I tasted this experience

    We will end the silence No longer be lenient

    Face our parents (x2)

     

    Codes :

    Strongman : Violent man

    Freedom : No escape

    Happiness : Misfortune


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  • Hello every body !

    Today I would like to present you my english-task that I had to made this week, I had to write a song with secret massages in it ! I decided to make a song who's talking about the mistake of our society and the future of our world. There it is !

    I hope you'll enjoy it !

     

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    Miss Take



    Sometimes I just don't understand

    Why are we sitting when we could stand

    Why are we fighting when we could live

    Why are we stealing when we could give

    Please just explain me

    Why there is always somebody

    Who will dominate easily

    Is it our destiny ?

    Or God's plan maybe ?

    It makes me feel scary

    For everyone else and for me

     

    Did you know that in Wonderland

    They have different plan

    Of what their life will be ?

    For example

    They do not fight the dragons

    They transform them into friends

    Who do not cause destruction

    And with them

    They create legends

    For their children

    Who at their turn

    Will create legends

    To make a sort of peace

    That we could call the end

    Of the dictatorial kiss

     

    It's with this sort of logic

    That one day we'll stop being

    Individualistic

    I hope you understand what I mean

    Cause I will not repeat

    We have to protect what's green

    Or prepare ourselves

    for a terrible halloween

     

    If you ask her for food she will feed you

    If you ask her for tools she will give you

    If you ask her for love she will love you

    But if you try to take it by force she will kill you

    That's why I respect her

    The land of all of us, our mother

     

     

     

    And one day I will thank her

    By dying in peace, staying with her

    I hope she will

    Forgive my brothers

    For their stupidity

    And their errors

    That we could clearly call a crime

    Against some one who just can't cry

     

    You know I just don't want to see you die

    I will do anything, it could be kill or lie

    And I give you my word

    I will defend this world

    Against the madness

    Of all these little lords

     

    This is the end of my declaration

    There will not be any abrogation

    redemption or reddition

    acceptable

    That would be able

    to change my mind

    I say good bye

    we'll meet another time


    ________________________

     

    There is the beat that i choose for go with the lyrics :

    And here is the messages :

    dragon : Governement

    dictatorial Kiss : Tyrani

    green : environement

    Halloween : destruction of the environement

    Mother/Her/She : Earth

    Brothers : rest of the Humanity

    Little lord : enterprise leader

     

    Thanks for reading and.. Let's see us a other time !


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